Bruno's Tea

I cycled out into the sun, wishing I could drive - it would be so much
quicker to make deliveries.

Handing Chin a big plastic bag, his dad said "here's the shopping for Mr. Green." Dad owned a milk bar, and sometimes Chin helped out after school with deliveries. Dad said it was the home deliveries that kept us in business and the tea Dad imported from Fuzhou. Chin loaded up his bicycle with Mr. Green's shopping. His order always included three packets of Dad's tea. Chin stopped outside Mr. Green's house, looking for Bruno, Mr. Green's dog. Chin knocked on Mr. Green's door. But there was no reply. He stepped into Mr. Green's hall. He looked for Mr. Green. But Mr. Green was not. He stopped outside the garage. He heard Bruno's whimper. Bruno came up to me and pulled on his shorts. Chin could see a shoe near the front of one of the cars. Mr. Green opened his eyes and sat up. He told Chin he'd been working on one of his car, When he tripped and hurt his ankle. Then, he could hardly move. Chin helped Mr. Green inside so that he could phone Mr. Green's sister to take him to the doctor. Mr. Green was so grateful.
This story is short. So, it is easy to read. If I was he , I could not to help Mr. Green. Because I think that I left home when there is no reply. But Chin looked for Mr. Green, I think that Chin has courage. (256)

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