Sunday, January 30, 2011
Impression
Now
Tomorrow
Respect
I want to ....
One day
Today
My Pets
Vacation Plan
Thursday, January 27, 2011
Coming of Age Day
New year!
Monday, January 17, 2011
TV show
Sport to watch
Motto
Drink
Shoes
Clothing
Sunday, January 16, 2011
My name
The Coat
"It was't just an old coat," he shouted. "The pockets were full of treasure!"Mark knew he shouldn't be listening under the window at old Mr Crowe's house. "What old coat?" asked a woman. Mr Crowe said the grey one, with all the pockets. Then Mark heard the woman speak again. "That old thing! I put it out for the garbage truck this morning." Mark thought that the woman must be Mr Crowe's daughter. Mr Crowe shouted "it wasn't just an old coat. The pockets were full of treasure." Mark had followed the garbage truck before. He could feel the sweat running down his back as he cycled up Hill Road. Mark wondered what could be in the pockets. At last Mark reached the top of the hill. He found the Crowe's bag and there was the coat at the top of the bag. Mark pulled it out and picked up his bike. At home, Mark spread out the coat and emptied the pockets. There was an old fob watch, a faded photo of a young woman, a locket, bottle tops and a shark's tooth. Mark thought that where was the treasure. Mark looked up when his mother came into the room. She asked what's all this. Mark said that just some old stuff he found at the dump. His mother said that it looks like someone's treasure. The next morning, Mark found Mr Crowe in his garden. Mark said that he found your coat. The old man looked surprised as he took his coat from Mark. Mr Crowe said that you've made an old man very hsppy. Mark smiled.
I was teach important things by this story. It is important things that momories are treasure than expensive stuff. I like this book. I recomend this book to you. (297)
points:2.2
remaining points: -1.3
Friday, January 14, 2011
Music
Class
Dish
Elementary school memory
Color
Vacation memory
Junior high school memory
Movie
Flower
Thursday, January 13, 2011
Sunday, January 9, 2011
Not Again
The accident changed David's life a lot, but there was a lot that didn't
changed.
David belong to basketball team. On the morning of the big game, he hurried preparations. Then, his friends came to David's home. David run out the door. Seconds later, there was a loud screech of car brakes. One minute later, Mrs Cooper's front door burst open. It was Alex. There were tears in his eyes. He could hardly speak. He said, "A car knocked him." Mrs Cooper reached David befire the ambulance did. When the ambulsnce arrived, he was lifted onto a stretcher and taken to hospital. He was lucky to be alive. But his legs were too badly damaged to support him. He would be in a wheelchair for the rest of his life. Befor the accident, David could still play basketball. He joined the Wheelchair Cowboys and played goal attack for the C team. The coach praise his play. David practised shooting for hours. He pushed his wheelchair for miles, and lifted weights to build his arm muscles. Then, David played for the A team.
I was moved by this story. I think wonderful that David wasn't frustrated when he can't move his legs. If I was he, I could not play basketball again. I recommend this book to you. (217)
points:2.7
remaining points:0.9
Dirt on My Shoe
"In fact," the ranger countinued, "we have found fossils up here of large andJordan and Kaitlyn were hiking on the Rainbow Ravine Trail with their families. As they were walking along, Pointing to Jordan's feet, Kaitlyn asked, "are you sure you want to take those brand new tennis shoes out here?" Jordan laughed and said, "They are going to get dirty one day. Come on, let's go!" They took off running and they climbed into the dry, empty canyon. Kaitlyn said, "I wonder if anything has ever lived here." Then, Jordan answered, "I think so. MIllions of years ago, places like this had lots of plants and animals. There might even be fossils here." Jordan looked at his new shoes. They were covered in sand and dirt. Jordan grabbed a handful of dirt and let it sift through his hand. The dirt landed right on his new shoes. Kaitlyn and Jordan walked back to the trail. They passed a group of hikers. A ranger explained, "Millions of years ago, there was lots of life up here. We have found fossils up here of large and small dinosaurs." Jordan and Kaitlyn stepped closer to listen. The ranger said, "Not all fossibls are of animals. There are sea shell and plant fossils up here." Then, Jordan and Kaitlyn ran to catch up with their families. They came back home. Jordan took off his shoes and shook the dirt out of both of them into the paper cup. He thought it's not just dirt. He is going to put it under his microscope at home. There are things in it he can't see right now.
small dinosaurs."
This book is easy. I thought I want to go there and I want to find fossils. I like to explore. When I read, I was excited by the story. I recommend this book to you. (309)
points: 2.2
points remaining:3.6